I had a writer make do this part of the project for me and my prof did not like

I had a writer make do this part of the project for me and my prof did not like it. I got (6/30). I have attached the original copy that I need modified. I can do the matrix part of it but could you just add in the parts that are missing?
I will need to talk about my direct and indirect competitors, what’s missing in my porters 5 forces & a paragraph for my matrix.
These were my instructions for the section: COMPETITION (30)
1. Describe your direct and indirect competition: their location, quality, pricing, key competitive features, trends, and indicate the industry
leader. (15) Include Porter’s 5 Forces
2. Prepare a detailed competitive matrix for your direct competition, to fit your industry. (10) Students should research at least five (5)
competitors to gather accurate data .
3. Provide details of research in the appendix, the data, and source (5).
These were her comments: “Poorly done section. Who are your direct competitors? Who are the other 6 goat
ranches in AB? Who is your indirect competitor? Beef? Pork? Chicken? Porter’s appears to be incomplete.”

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